drifting away
from everything
slipping away
from everything
oblivious
will you return?
A contest entry
- Quickie 12 -12-12 by Cerulean Sunrise.
425 points, ended October 18, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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ya know what, others may think this is lame or whatever- but i actually like it and that's all that matters since I wrote it!
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short and sweet. doesn't make a ton of sense to me but it looks cool.
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nicely written. the way you spaced out the lines was neat. very creative.
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Wonderful. I love how you spaced the lines like someone was drifting off into a limbo. Beautifully written. I hope to see more soon.
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Good question..
Nice
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