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Mineralization

Strangling depths in the dark
Wonder how, a golden lark
Straining hard into the night
Seeing there is such great fright
The Jasper Deception

The turning tides inside my mind
Hearing gears that slowly grind
Buttons click and tender mists
Form themselves into fists
The Jade Revelation

Nozzles opened with apparel above
From below, heaven releases a dove
Forcing open the stony apparatus
Life and death, no such status
The Ruby Persecution

Running quaint, startling howls
Life pertained, from nights frozen owls
Gasping for this breath (hollow, gaunt)
A not-so brief, serious jaunt
The Onyx Reaper

Author notes

Word Bank Number One

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golden
deception
mist
heaven
death
breath
reaper

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  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 18, 2007

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    This is just amazing yea ,Good job beautiful. Goodl uck to you in the contest but by the judges reaction you dont need it.Love yeah huggles


  • TheLostGirl
    October 18, 2007

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    OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    This was so amazing and I am not only breatless but I am speech less this was absolutly a pleasure to read thank you for picking an option oh let me know if you are a boy or a girl so I can place you

    • Eots
      October 18, 2007
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      Boi. Glad you enjoyed it. Good luck with your contest.

      ~Asa of the Poets of Ferality