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Nursery Rhymes by Abused Children

I'm A Little Teapot

I'm a little girl who
Gets left out.
Hope's a candle
Mum put out.
If she hears me crying, she will shout:
Pick me up, give me a clout.

Jack and Jill

Dad and me,
Went out to sea
All ready to go fishing.
But he got cross,
He pushed me off
And now I'm classed as 'missing'.

Author notes

This is against abuse, mental or physical, to any other living being, especially those who have no chance of defending themselves. Please tell me if you agree with this.

Any constructive crticism please! A feeling poem, but it's not great!

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  • ember-blair
    October 18, 2007

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    wow,
    I love how this was put together.
    very creative.
    I hope the best for you.
    Things will get better.