Rising scents in fumes of dance steamed,
whispering flavors of caramel upon lips of dark chocolate
Melting embrace dissolve groping grip, as if ladle skiing in pail
Sweet ripples tease tauntingly against tongue, searing passions thirst
Pacing breath pant in heave of mountains, melting caps
Tilt to moon reverberate howls from deep with-in,
rattling against belly button
Limp of limb submit, lulled in lullaby... inducing dreams unreal
Guzzled tantalization journey beyond buds of taste,
to belly’s special place
Tilted to plateau, sweet chocolate sensations rushes, and then subside…
Leaving sweeping tongue to relish against perked lips…
the memory
Author notes
Prompt: Picture Prompt
In a list
A contest entry
- Abstract Choices by Celticmoon.
625 points, ended November 8, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Vanilla and Chocolate - a Sensual Confection by dance11.
1000 points, ended April 20, 2008, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You have an unusual way of expressing the sensations and memories that I really appreciate. Well done. Thank you for entering!
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It is such memories that keep passion alive for many people. Glad to see that your mind recalls such passionate endeavours. Thank you for entering and good luck!
Blessings
Bel
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Are you serious??!! The piece TOTALLY flowed....geez...what a tasteful poem!!!
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what a memory i liked the abstract choices you used to taintalize my brain i give it to you from a writers point of view you made me think about things very deeply
juju
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