my heart, ripped
at the seams.
smaller and smaller
the pieces tear.
Broken, like a
piece of glass.
shattered into
tiny pieces.
ripped to shreds,
by the broken
pieces of my heart.
Blood dripping from
the wounds on my hand
trying to put these shattered
pieces back together again...
Tears running down
my eyes, like
a raging waterfall.
The hurt that
you caused me
leaving me emotional scars.
my heart shatters
more and more
every time I think
about you.
So just go ahead
rip my heart
out of me.
tear it with
your grudging
hands.
Let me die
here alone
in the shadows
Author notes
to my ex
A contest entry
- Make me cry, laugh, and wish for more by dreamfinder.
520 points, ended October 19, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Very well done!!!!
Another well written poem with alot of emotion through out the whole write. Not once letting the reader wonder their thoughts into anything but the pain that is felt from this shattered heart. Great job again. Gary
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wow this is awesome very good descriptive writing. An emotional write from deep within ones heart. This is very beautiful
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felt alot of lost love and lost hope in the poem!! u did a great and wonderful job with the poem!!! Good luck!! keep on writting!
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I really felt for your lost love there. Good job & good luck
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