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As Long As Eternity Exists

As long as eternity exists
My heart will belong with yours
Blooming into wonder with spring flowers
Tears of joy falling in waltz with summer rain
Plunges of perfection in nature's gorgeous painting
Wakes of gentle snowflake kisses in the cold
Going hand in hand and dividing in two
The whole world that we have around us
Can't change the way our love lasts
Even when seasons change I'm indebted by soul to you.

Author notes

Prompt : When Seasons Change
I don't know. I just decided to put a tiny persuasion of untouchable love in there. It was like saying no matter what you go through, your love remains unbroken. Knowing that lots of differences are spotted during each season, saying that your love is so strong that it won't move an inch through thunderstorms, hurricanes, and so much more just makes it sound so amazing. And we know love is amazing.

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  • Errant Panther gold member
    October 18, 2007

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    lovely romantic feel and imagery shines through this, nature truly is the gorgeous painting you have portrayed at your easel, good luck to you also.


    • Xox ILY xoX
      October 18, 2007
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      Thank you muchly. ^-^ Yours was way more beautiful, though. I could never have penned something like that. I'll keep trying, though. Many thanks for the comment, and you go write tons more so I can come read and be in awe. xD


  • poet2angels gold member
    October 18, 2007

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    beautifully written for the prompt! I have always loved blending nature with love...

    Lynda


    • Xox ILY xoX
      October 18, 2007
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      Thank you. I've also loved blending the two, I don't know. Seasons happen every year, sometimes different than the one before. But love? It can waver, even though we would hope from deep down that it wouldn't. If it does change, I'm sure we would hope it's because it's getting stronger and more unbreakable. Hm, yea. That sounds about right. Haha. Well, I had fun at least. Thanks for the contest.


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    October 18, 2007
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    A beautiful take on this prompt. Change..
    Lovely!


    • Xox ILY xoX
      October 18, 2007
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      Thanks Marker. Means a lot to me what you think of it. But surely, I could've done better. I'm still glad you liked it, though.

  • poet2angels gold member
    October 18, 2007
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    prompt is:
    "When Seasons change"
    or
    the pic above...

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