Hazy grasping
Pastel paint
Quiet rasping
Pictures quaint
Leaves are falling
Time is buried
No more stalling
For berries varied
Lack of danger
Nature's Rearranger.
A contest entry
- Early Bird Quickiness...10/10L/30m by poet2angels.
475 points, ended October 18, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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haha sweet. Most people cant be arsed rhyming when it comes to quickies so it's amazing that you've done so. NOt only that but the flow was amazing and didnt make the poem sound cheeky!
I think though that you need a better title?
All the best and keep writing,
Never ♥
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I like this piece it is very nice.Thank you for sharing this.Best wishes and much love
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very unique with lovely rhyme...
TY for entering
Lynda
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prompt is:
"When Seasons change"
or
the pic above...
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intresting.......
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