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Our Sandstone Salutations

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I am wild with yellow wind, my eyes of morning blush,
your softest pool of golden zephyr in promised,
thirsty land, of continental drifting.


I rise from wet, to swell inside your ancient mirror of misty meadow,
Autumn’s crush, embracing chill’s fresh, leafy quiver.


Come with me to write in feathers,
as billowed hearts, through heaven’s canyon,

what blooms might blow, as true companions,

traversing desert waves in laughter’s palette,
parchment’s earthward swirling, to fly with love, our sandstone salutations.






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  • Never Fall in Love
    October 19, 2007

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    woah .. .your poem painted me a picture that does not fully describe your visual aid above. The imagery from the poem was way better - but that's just how good your poem was

    Congrats on the gold trophy!

    All the best and keep writing,
    Never ♥


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    October 18, 2007
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    Beautiful!
    Congrats!


  • poet2angels gold member
    October 18, 2007

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    This is so beautiful and with its imagery you can see Seasons change and love bloom...Gorgeous!
    Lynda

  • poet2angels gold member
    October 18, 2007
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    prompt is:
    "When Seasons change"
    or
    the pic above...