Perched over splendor's view of forever
I gaze autumn's changing leaves of color
Fractions pure to mute our endeavor
Human activities replaced by lore
Fabled wonders cause utter surrender
As within a valley of hues God smiles
Bright upon the world though softly tender
With a felt radiance known for long miles
Dreams merge light with cleaner reality
Whist from this soul gone is brutality
Author notes
"When Seasons change"
A contest entry
- Early Bird Quickiness...10/10L/30m by poet2angels.
475 points, ended October 18, 2007, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wonderful use of vocab and rhyme to set the mood and capture the imagery of the season, love the line "Dreams merge light with cleaner reality" best wishes to you also.
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Wow, I feel like clinging to yours. ._. I told myself that mine wouldn't amount to yours even a bit. And it doesn't by far. very amazing imagery, and the words you used ... gr. -jealousy- Tehe, good job.
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beautiful!
The word usage and imagery here is lovely
So much beauty to breathe in.....
Lynda:
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prompt is:
"When Seasons change"
or
the pic above...
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