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Thin Wallet of Eternity

Take a heart torn out like a page
from the book of changes destiny arranged
feet blimped like Mickey Mouse's
frozen meat thawing out rages

Where spirit is an out of body circle
while those other males have wallets fat
she sees the political correctness of responsibility
necessarily inside her births warm

Over the world cultures had raged
us and them always advantaged r.e.m.
in lifetime's rave in the forests growing
so dreams are cut down and sold where the money goes

into eternity with the wallet thin
salvation.

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  • BeautifulFlame gold member
    October 18, 2007

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    Not sure i understood the message behide it , but i liked it!
    I really think this is very thought provoking and i will figure it out before the day is up!
    I loved the first verse!

    Take a heart torn out like a page
    from the book of changes destiny arranged
    feet blimped like Mickey Mouse's
    frozen meat thawing out rages


    very good,
    ~lisa~

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