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Rummage in your Congenial Heart

The present of might

Causes me to grieve

Adherent by your lies

Not pertain to yours



Interpose me in your heart

Legion of pain you did

Gawk all those near to you

But your voice is dulcet



Let me shroud to you

Before i glean my heart

So long to be idle

I'm oblivion to you



The past glints through me

I don't want to elude

This derelict emotion

But now hate subdues my soul

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i just started out making poem,,, is this poem really that bad?

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  • breathethedream
    October 18, 2007
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    i love the line "im oblivion to you"