A holiday noon, summer time ~
That's the first page in my dream,
A book with tales and rhyme
Enchantment ~ its prime theme.
I slowly opened my dearest book
The world transformed to a fairy land,
A garden, hillside and a lovely brooke
All came live and took their stand.
The flower I touched became a gem stone
Lilies became diamonds, roses became rubys
They all glittered, in sunlight they shone,
There were fairies, as I touched one of the bees.
Wishing for a rainbow, I took the cloth by my side
Away it flew and took its place on the sky,
My horses were unicorns, as I mounted to ride
And down we came, after a sail so high.
My hat was transformed to a boat in brown
Stars twinkled from the dandellions I blew
My wreath became a golden crown
And a castle ascended from the kite I flew.
Thus went the tale, I read them page by page
Those were the chapters from my dream,
I was the star, the earth ~ my stage
And enchantment ~ its prime theme.
A contest entry
- A Magical Touching Contest ! by Melodies.
650 points, ended October 23, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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OOOOOOOoooooooooooo!!!
I wanna go with you!
Grand writing, dear poet! A poem distinguished by magical thinking supreme! 
Radiant lines with images that gather up the reader into a wonderful dream. 
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oh my...this is an enchanting poem indeed!! Oh I love all the magical images you've written and I do hope that this fantasy land would also visit my mind someday...very captivating!!!
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Wow, what a beautiful write my friend,
I love all of the imagery and magic that
you added into this one. If only such
things could happen with just the touch
of a finger, Well done and good luck
to you in this contest!
Jeremy0826
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