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Furls~

She came to me in metaphors

 in mystifiable languages merge


 

Enswathed me in her spirit

while curling around my canvas


 

Illumination intensifying with

 


 

 

tremors of touching...

 


 

 

 

 lingering...

 

 

 

 

 

     liquefied lips,  


 

 

 

tittilation's tease. 

 


 

 

In feathered motions of furl~

 


 

She placed her profound passions

upon her playground

                             - of purple pillows


Knowing~ 


 

She was more

  

                   than anything,

 

   and nothing...


 

to be captured by

 

 

mauve mouthed fingertips

 ...pleased

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Prompt- purple passions on purple pillows & pic inspired

rough draft will edit tomorrow it's late

A contest entry

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  • poetryality silver member
    February 9, 2008

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    There is enchantment, intrigue, mystery, allure, perfection, and sweet succulent word flavor posted on this page! OMG! Where do I begin to expound on the beauty, intensity, and sincerity written here. Loved the alliteration and resonance that played like a lyre throughout the entire poem. Whew! I am totally bowled over and wonder why I've come just now to give proper praise.

    Brilliant!


    Much Love Always ♥

    Renee


  • Jalalbad gold member
    December 1, 2007

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    This is deserving of the gold throphy. It is enchanting!
    Judy


  • poeticweaver gold member
    November 15, 2007

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    Awesome!

    Congrates on a wonderfully weaved piece of poetic imagery.. I absolutely loved how you worded this one.. and I want to thank you for sharing this here. Way to go on the Gold sweet soul! Much love to you and yours, your friend, Timothy~


  • BeautifulFlame
    October 19, 2007
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    I loved it! Goodluck and thanks for entering!
    ~Lisa~