These hidden barriers that come
between us may keep us apart for
now but I know some day my love
we will be together
We have been separated for what
seems like a life time, though it
has only been a little while
But my love for you only Grows
with each day that keeps us apart
So wait for me my love as I shall
always wait for you
A contest entry
- Simple Love complicated Love (picture Inspired)! by BeautifulFlame.
475 points, ended October 30, 2007, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Excellent Poem !
I really like this poem. it is packed full of love and emothions both the same. As well as it sounds as though it is a personal poem that was written straight from your heart ! But my love for you only Grows, with each day that keeps us apart.So wait for me my love as I shall, alway's wait for you.Wonderful, Wonderful,Poem ! I can't wait to read more of your poems on love. Brenda Gae
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Very simply stated the love one feels for another, and the hope they have for the two of them for the future. A lovely golden winner in this contest. Congratulations.
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thank you
so hows things going?
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A beautiful poem and a well deserved GOLD.
Congratulations.
Anna.
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This was really a great write!
Thanks for entering!
~Lisa~
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