Do these cohesive bonds create reactive fusion?
Can the negative attract a positive charge,
If I place the emitter on a standardized,
Alloy-phaser charged fuel rod?
I think the bonds are strong indeed,
Says one professor to another,
To allow for successful intimation
Of the enclosed particles,
As brainwave matter truly is,
A fluous substance,
Two biological pairings,
Check the Mendel chart for equitable
Genetic compatibility,
Don't want any
Malformed substances now,
Do we?
This love thing is such
A delicate operation!
How can these magneto drives
Stabilize with such force of
Electromagnetic attraction!
Blast if I know how the spectometer endures,
I shall need to consult
My barometric readings.
Propulsion is stabilizing,
Professor,
Hand me a forcep,
I am going to rewire
This power coupling.
Surely we can make this love thing work,
We are, scientists after all!
A contest entry
- The Cerebral Poet's Love and Emotion Challenge by wbiro.
300 points, ended October 21, 2007, 2 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Haha, good job!!
tis all i can say of now.
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Haha nicely done Bra, bordering on the cheeky but always remains on the right side of tasteful.
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Now that I've awarded the trophies I see you... good job, techno... I see a dispassionate Virgo in your future... lol
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Oh, slightly longer than your anonymous sole competitor's piece in this contest... I've read that entry, let's see what you have... well, the first line right out of the gate is a mile over the heads of our female audience! lol Let's see if you swoop down and pick them up and carry them away... hmmm, the only word that will 'stick out' in the first stanza is 'rod' lol I see a pun there, sorry... so, so far the girls are checking out your rod... kind of a scientific piece you have there... hehe they'll like that, so one point for that... the second stanza your standing there with your clipboard, and the girls are tapping their feet in impatience...! Now the girls will assume that your barometric readings are somewhere under your trousers... that will raise an eyebrow or two in anticipation... one more point for that... and in the end the dispassioned analysis of the scientific mind- forever doomed to failure in such an illogical and indefinable pursuit! But- three clappies for entering, and good enough for silver! You beat all the competition on the entire site except one, congratulations!
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