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Deja Vu

Images come to me in the darkness
Flittering into my subconscious
I absorb the meaning
Then forget…

During waking hours
Without warning
Feelings    emotions
Thoughts    memories
Sights    sounds
Flood my mind

Never before have I been here…
These sights and sounds
Never truly experienced
Consciously…..

And yet now they are real
Deja Vu.

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  • SilverWolf
    September 26, 2008

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    i know that feelin...
    but sometimes when something happens (nothing serious just daily things) like while its happening\rite after it happend, i feel like ive been doing that beofre or done it

    I.e

    me and ur daughter are talking for the first time and then you come along and get really mad at her for no reason...

    while that was happening i wudda been thinkin "this has happened before.." or "what the..."
    somethin like that

    lol
    yhah
    weird example

    good poem
    gonna bookmark it
    i think i gonna make a dejuv contest now... lol.


  • Shakes-spear
    October 24, 2007

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    Been there.....

    I do this all the time. Sometimes I tell whom ever is with me, whats going to happen next and it does.
    love and kisses to you and yours, The Shaker


    • Tali28
      October 24, 2007

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      Thanks

      It can be very creepy at times.... glad to know there are others close to me that share thess perminisions. Thanks also for your applauds. Take care.
      Much love,
      Tali


  • slasherwolf
    October 19, 2007
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    nice peac

    That's well done very nicely done mom kep up the good wark.
    love slash

    • Tali28
      October 19, 2007
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      Thanks

      Thanks for your support and for your comments. The applauds are appericated as well Thanks again.
      Much love,
      Tali Mom


  • Salt Walker
    October 18, 2007
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    to you to


    • Tali28
      October 18, 2007
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      Thanks

      Thank you for your comment and your applaudes they are appericated.
      Tali


  • Sabir Abdus Samee
    October 18, 2007
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    Good

    I liked your poem.


    • Tali28
      October 18, 2007
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      Thanks

      I am glad you liked it thanks again.
      Tali


  • Death From Above
    October 18, 2007
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    I may not be in the best of moods right now but your writing is amazing

    • Tali28
      October 18, 2007
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      Thanks

      Thank you for your support as always. Glad you like it. The applauds are very much appericated also. Take care and much love,
      Tali

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