My predictions were right all along,
I never was nothing to you.
Everyword you ever said was a lie,
You never fucking cared about me.
This hurts me to much,
I will not keep going on.
My heart has been shattered,
It will never be mended.
Do you wonder if I'm okay?
To try to talk to me?
You just keep living your life,
Like I was never anything to you.
I am a worthless piece of shit,
I can't stop cutting myself.
It's the only way I'm living right now,
I can't live without you by my side.
My heart will never be mended,
I don't think I can love again.
Don't know how long I can keep fighting,
I'm slowly dying and no one cares.
Please tell me what you think
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I feel ur pain!!='[[
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i think that your poem had a lot of meaning to it and i really understand how you feel and i hope everything works out for you good luck
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a yea...big dif
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yea.....that's not how it happened....um.....nice...so we don't care huh..I think I'm the only one who does.....I sat here and missed out on partying, and talked to you ALOT to help...and telling someone you're cutting over them.....what do you usually call people like that? you must have been on coke or E that night, definatley tanked ...i know you've been snorttin' and where you get it.
pffffffftttttttttt
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i edited the poem....sorry...and i was fucked up that night and yeah....very hurt
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i know how you feel exactly.....if you ever need anything, talk to me....i can't guarantee that i can help but i can tell you i'll try....and if i don't succeed in trying at least i'll listen......
-michelle
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You have me to talk to if you need anyone! This poem is so sad and full of all sorts of emotions, which you did a great job of expressing! I hope everything gets better! (It will, I know it!) keep up your great work! and remember, hold your head up! Never let anyone get you down!
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I have sent you a separate message about the real life emotions, but On the poem front I think this is out there, and straight to the face of the one who hurt you.
I loved the flow.
Well done
K
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