Your breath on my neck
Sends chills up my spine.
Your fingers dance across my chest
Tracing a path along my torso.
Your kisses wash away my fear
and turn my blood to liquid gold.
So, make me yours tonight, and
Have your wicked way with me
For I am your prize; So claim your reward
as you swallow the sound of your name.
Author notes
45 words [Word= 3 letters or more]
Finally broke the writer's block!
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired! 15 entries, 15 lines, 50 words or less! by danceswsquirrels.
450 points, ended October 23, 2007, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a great write flows perfectly. Congrats on the bronze
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A thrilling piece!!
Full of heat...
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**pant pant** I think I'm in heat, Mistress, thanks to you! "Have your wicked way with me..." THat sounds like something me and my friends would say. We say random things and pretend we're porn stars!
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Very sexy, sensual piece-I love it! I especially adore the last clever line
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