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Fairy Tale

Crimson red stains white,
so pretty,
yet so tragic.
It’s how fairy tales really end,
after they close the curtains.

Stainless steel on peach colored skin,
it’s painful,
but feels so good.
No prince can take the pain away,
there are no happy endings.

Clear blue tears from hazel-green eyes,
leak down the pale face,
letting everything out.
The poison has been swallowed,
no one to wake her now.

Shiny  silver casket inside the dirty ground,
lowered down,
six feet under.
There will be no happy ending for me,
fairy tales were just a dream.

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  • hopelessly-broken
    November 22, 2007

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    awww wow this is soo sad!! so full of imaghery i totally loved it

    "No prince can take the pain away,
    there are no happy endings."
    loved that bit!!

    are you ok tho?? you no u can talk to me always

    love you heaps
    love HB
    xoxoxox

  • llama2
    October 30, 2007

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    great!!!

    okay, so i think you told me about this when you first wrote it...and i just now read it...i liked the poem but sad to say i agree with Joe...just because the fairy tale was just a dream doesnt mean you cant make a happy ending...


  • Twilight Moon
    October 18, 2007
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    great poem ..loved it


  • mollyeh13
    October 18, 2007

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    good write deary
    awesome job!
    i loved it
    even though it is sad
    it seems like the truth
    ALOT of the time
    <3 Molly

  • LoZfan03
    October 17, 2007
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    yeah, fairy tales aren't real, but that doesn't mean you can't have a happy ending. chin up

    good write though

  • LoZfan03
    October 17, 2007

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    well, yeah. fairy tales aren't real. that doesn't mean you can't have a happy ending

    great write thoug


  • HorseRidinBbe07
    October 17, 2007
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    good poem... wish you didnt feel that way babe.
    take care,
    hmm?
    xxxxxx

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