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Grasping onto StarDust

I

Tendrils of sparks, erupting-
grasping of hearts, corrupting.
Malison meanders in plain,
graping to StarDust for gain.

II

Traveling dust of cosmos,
chaos forming; she knows.
Poison lullaby of rhapsody.
Stolen flits of wings sadly.

III

Hourglass slipping in transpose
plucking dreams, petals of rose.
Minuscule tears, one grain-
grasping to StarDust for gain.

IV

Curves and curls, twists.
Crystal memories bliss,
fashion wings of golden rays,
falling dust at end of days.

V

Hold the dream in part-
push it through to heart.
Refracting light to stain,
grasping to StarDust for gain.

VI

Among the fallen gaze,
frozen soul in ice, ablaze.
StarDust sprinkled air
in false Mal De mar.

Author notes

Reading back it's alittle weird, but it goes with a picture I drew of a girl trying to fly with wings that keep dissolving.

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  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    January 21, 2008

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    I visualize the picture,
    thus the words are enhanced,
    describing a scene
    unusual, entranced.

    Aesthete


  • Shamanicmusings
    October 18, 2007

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    The girl was still determined though.
    Is this an autobiographic write perhaps?
    Its funny what comes to mind when looking at pictures or just doodling.