I can get inside the most weak of minds and
twist thoughts into murderous frames of death.
My visions are pounding, creatures screaming
as i peer into her bedroom window.
She's sooo innocent, laying there sleeping,
unaware of a demon's darkened presence.
These beasts, they live in me, oh how
i wish to slice into the writhing body of pleasure.
Peel the flesh of a naive little mind
whilst bathing in perspiration; the FEAR of control.
The blade in my hand is twitching; twitching.....
my hand shuddering with uncontrollable excitement.
My prey is perfect in every way,
shapely body;
perfect breasts and
a virgins frame of mind; or so i thought.....
Quietly, ever so quietly i open the window,
ignoring the little birdies of cessation
fluttering through my utter torment.
A slaughterhouse of digital desparation
displayed on a screen-like template
::my depraved little psyche::
And now above her i hover; twitching.....
Hell deteriorates logic as fire shoots
from my murderous eyes; craving this butchery.
Sunken are my lens; a dark underline that gives
me the look of Satan himself; my presence
from the depths of damnation.
Quickly, i make my move, my hand silencing
screams and pushing her head into her pillow.
I press my blade against her throat; slightly cutting
and expecting to feel her writhing beneath me.
Nothing.......
Nothing......
Silence.....
Then.....a muffled laugh.
I stare into my prey's eyes in the dim moonlight
and see pleasure; NOT FEAR....
"You FUCKIN CUNT, i swear you laugh again,
i'll slice your throat ear to ear.
I'll gut your pathetic corpse and FUCK
you till you die...." I menace,
my voice a vehement growl.
.......laughter.......
as i press the blade deeper into her throat.
Finally, i remove my hand and she speaks:
"Ha, go ahead.....do it, i DARE you,
slit my throat; FUCK ME! I know
who you are.......
your the serial killer on the news,
but i'm not afraid you see, not like them,
i've been waiting for you.....
For a very long time....." She replies.
I pull her head back farther, letting the knife
sink into her neck; deeper....deeper....
cutting through the fear i THOUGHT was there.
Still nothing.
"Come on......fuck me,
tie me down like your victims,
i want to FEEL what THEY FEEL...."
She replies, spreading her legs.
I can feel my cock bulging, oh how i wanted her,
but suddenly.....i felt remorse.
I-DON'T-WANT-TO-KILL-HER.....
I WANT TO LET HER LIVE.........
Turmoil, i feel fear for her and a spark of love,
of pure affection; but i can't control myself.
I take out the long threads of razor wire i brought,
wrapping her wrists tight till they bleed.
I bind her to the headboard.....she cannot fight.
My twitching blade slashes violently through
her clothes--tearing the fabric like butter.
Soon, she's naked before me as i trace my tongue
along her erect nipples.
I suck; bite; the monster within unleashed.
I suck on her smooth, errorless stomach;
globs of flesh so sweet drenched in sweat.
She moans; spreading her legs farther as i slip
two fingers into her; pushing in and out.
I massage and rub her clit; her pleasure
growing larger; she's so wet for me; for my demons.
I begin to lacerate skin; licking at the blood
that flows as she begs for more.
BEGS me to slice deeper; SHE WANTS TO FEEL PAIN.
I close my mouth upon her soft, warm throat;
feeling her pulsing arteries begging in lust.
I bite and suck at the wound my knife caused;
drinking the thick, crimson liquid.
Finally, i drop my pants and thrust into her,
her thighs rising to meet my shaft as i slip inside.
She's soo wet, lubricated; her voice turning me on;
hearing her scream in ecstacy as our climax hightens.
Suddenly, IT TAKES OVER.....I CAN'T STOP IT,
I TRY....OH HOW I TRY..
"NO! THIS......FUCKIN.....PAIN...."
i scream, terror....raging.....pulsing.....terror.
It's alive, it's inside again.....no, i can't control it.
"SHE-HAS-TO-LIVE.....PLEASE DON'T KILL HER.....
OH SHIT......SOMEBODY FUCKIN HELP ME.....
I CAN'T STOP THIS.....THIS FUCKIN PAIN
I'M GOING TO KILL, PLEASE.....
I DON'T WANT TO FEEL THIS WAY!" i scream,
lost in madness; insanity taking over.
The beast is unleashed as i shoot off my load,
she shakes at my angered voice;
oh so laced in hatred......a vile sickened disease.
Then......my voice changes as HE takes over,
Daemon he is called.
"You FUCKIN bitch," he whispers to her as
him and i continue to ride her.
"Him and i are going to rip you wide open...."
Orgasms increase and my knife loses reality.
Slicing, slashing, hacking bits of filth,
decaying little FUCKIN whore.
Her errorless belly is flayed by hatred,
a blood-splattered release of sexual pleasure.
A gaping wound ejaculates intestines,
coiled in a ball of urinated fear.
But still she begs FOR DEATH AND
WE'RE OFF.....throat sliced ear to ear
at the drop of a maddened scream.
Her orgasms die to the erratic spurting
of arterial spray set to deaths war drums.
And like that i'm out, slipping back
into a conscious state.
Daemon is gone, the beast put back
into his steel cage.
Now i'm off to sleep, feeling rather
hungry; no recollection what-so-ever.....
waiting on another night
Author notes
Fuzzy, here are my two options from your contest. If you didn't already figure out, i'm the female victim. Then again, you know me WAY TO WELL, you've known me for how long?? Haha, i think you could have guessed that:
1)Write detailed poem on your Fantasy fuck
2)The mind of a killer, I want you to go into Graphic detail on how you would do it
A contest entry
- Impress me (Adults ONLY) by thefuzzy1.
566 points, ended November 26, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A fab piece of art! Deprived, sick, deranged, twisted and all the rest. I
this one...dunno how I ever missed it....The imagery was evil and gruesome...the best and only kind of course. Simply fantastic hunni!
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lolol
thanks!!!!!!
^_^
This piece actually runs really deep for me!
HAHA,
but you already know by now that i'm fuckin sick and twisteD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
This comment coming from you is an HONOR!
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I am not sure that I was suppose to be turned on by this... but WOW!!! This was just HOT!!
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LMFAO
IT TURNED ME ON WRITING IT!!!!!!!!!!11
This is seriously how i wish i could die!!!
NOT EVEN JOKING!
If i could choose my own death, this would be it
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Hehehe, Damn thats a fine vision of a slaughter! We don't want to kill her... LOL
Excellent!!
~T.S~
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Wow!
Excellent piece as always synthetic nightmare. You have the reader following the disturbing tale from beginning to end. Good luck in the contest!
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i bet this victim was well inspired fired up and happy i am glad it was very interesting story it was well worth the long journey good luck in the contest
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My way of leaving is...Beer in one hand, smoke in the other, and my g/f somewhere else
I'm almost gobsmacked at your depravity, and trust me, that's a good thing, lol. This is fucking amazing!
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wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *clap clap* a-fuckin-mazing.
ah shit...no pun intended XD
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Very NICE...
You have such a great mind... I swear you had me sooo fuckin turned on from that story and now I just wanna FUCK SOMETHIN...
hahahaha
Keep up the good work
and good Luck in the contest
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LMFAO
HAHA, Fuzz, i turned MYSELF ON with this story!!! lmfao
i'm so glad you created this contest cause this was SOOOOOO MUCH FUN TO WRITE!!! YOU HAVE NO IDEA. Lol. this is seriously THE BEST way to die -
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Well I don't intend on Dying any time soon but if I got to choose a way this would definatly be it... -
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WELL THAT'S GOOD TO KNOW! AND FUZZY, you better KEEP IT THAT WAY! YOU'RE NOT GOING TO DIE UNTIL YOUR OLD, GROSS, GREY, WHITE AND WRINKLED......
haha
but HELL YES on that statement!
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O.O WHAT!!!
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NO! THAT WASN'T WHAT I MEANT! LMFAO
you can definitely die like that, i didn't say you COULDN'T! LMFAO. But when you DO DIE LIKE THAT, YOU ARE GOING TO BE OLD AND WRINKLED! LOL -
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Oh Fuck you
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you die before you hit 25 and I WILL RESURRECT YOU AND BEAT YOUR FUCKIN ASS!
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HAHAHAHAHA
Don't make me laugh... hun YOU kick MY ass you'd have to get a ladder to even reach the back of my knees... LMFAO
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STUNNING WRITING
THE QUEEN OF DARK IS AT IT AGAIN. DARK AND BRILLIANT THIS WAS. AN ORGY OF VIOLENCE AND DESIRE. THE IMAGERY WAS OUTSTANDING IN THIS. I COULD FEEL ALL OF THE EMOTIONS PORTRAYED IN THIS PIECE. THE FLOW RAN LIKE BLOOD DOWN HER BODY. AMAZING WRITING. MORE PLEASE
ALL THE BEST
WAYNE
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LOL
THANKYOU SOOO MUCH! I'm glad you enjoyed this. I couldn't think of a better way to die and leave this world
I guess my twisted mind creates great artistry!
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