Even though life is now stressing me,
My mind has been restlessly
Obtaining the best of me...
This contemplation about my pain,
Bleeds from my brain onto the page,
Releasing and repeating what I have to say.
There's never any exceptions,
I sell a variety of collections
Endlessly answering my own questions.
Narrow minds approach with caution,
Sometimes my thoughts can be noxious,
Because my ink is addictive and toxious.
Some days I feel like a genius,
But really I guess it seem this
May just be the impulse of an extremist.
Author notes
Not sure what to say about this one...I like it...like it's rhyme and flow...what do you think???
Please tell me what you think
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Even though life is now stressing me,
My mind has been restlessly
Obtaining the best of me...
this is such a cool write.. well i can so relate to this situation, it happens to me when i want to finish many things at once with out starting any, i loved ur flow.. it just slips out of my mouth
well just ur titlte.. im sure u can do better than poison impulse.. its a dull title for such an impulsive title..
keep the ink flowing
abuyi
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Good write. Certainly like the flow of this. I'm not too crazy about the last word though. Maybe something like impulse of a linguist would sound better? Just a suggestion. Keep up the great work.
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