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I want you back................

You say you love me, but how can that be true
I have waited so long, to be back with you
You tell me to wait, you need some time
But how long babe, till the day once again you will be mine
You say Iam the only one, thats really in your heart
But come on babe, we would nt be apart
How much longer do I have to sit back, and watch you with another girl
You are my all you are my everything, my world
Ihave had many offers to be with a man, one who s love is true
But I can t for my heart aches for you
So please tell me now, will we be togeather again
Or will this be it, our love has come to the end
You know how I feel, and I really need to know
Should I keep loving you, or just let you go?

I will always be here even as a friend
that relationship will never come to an end................

Author notes

one day you will wake up and realize she is perfect for you, and she will wake up next to the guy who already knew* trace3grls

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  • trace3grls
    November 6, 2007
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    i have fixed it up sorry......


  • Poetryistherapy
    November 6, 2007

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    This was fantastic, and I would love to be able to judge this in my contest, however, the rules were not followed...

    please correct this within 24 hours!!

    I loved this poem, I really don't want to have to remove it...


  • xxlisajazminexx
    October 17, 2007

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    loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    just whats i was looking for and written as if it were coming out of my own mouth too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    even better!!!!
    just 2 spelling errors that i saw which were" "mnie" should be "mine"
    and "togeather" should be "together"
    other than that.... fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    great job!!!!




    Thank you so much for entering this creative work of art into my Contest!!!!!!!

    much love and respects!!!
    XxLisaJazminexX
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    • trace3grls
      October 18, 2007
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      thankyou it is how iam feeling right now.. I hope it works out for you and me both...lol

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