It's going to be hard but I'm trying to move on
I just can't be happy in this place we call home.
Being upset,the arguing,no luck,no success
I'm tired of being caught up in this crazy mess.
It's time for a change,I know I deserve one
After all the drama I've been through for so long.
Good Luck on your journey,I wish you the best
I can't take no more this I must confess!!
I hated for this to happen but what must I do?
You are tired of me and I beeeeeeeeen tired of you!!
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This poems sounds as if your having a really tough time, Struggles and pain. Your feelings are very well describes. Good job.
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this made me think of all the tough times i've been through. i'm sorry if you've ever felt any of the feelings that you decsride so precisely. i hope you are relieved at least the tiniest bit that you arent the only one who understands anothers deep sorrow even if they have a different emotion on the outside. but i was only a little confused when you said" good luck on your journey" maybe try to make that a litle more clearer to the reader.but all in all this is a very good write. God Bless.
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Thank you for your comment. In this piece when I stated "good luck on your journey." This means two people who are splitting up and I wish him good luck in his future.To me life is a "journey."
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I know the feeling well. I like this a lot. I can feel the pain and frustration in this piece of writing. Well done
Wayne
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You are very welcome.As I said before, I look forward to reading more of your work.Many Blessings from North Carolina"The DEEEEEP SOUTH!!"
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Thank you for your comments!! I also appreciate you taking the time to read my poems. I look forward to reading and enjoying some more of your work also. Best wishes!!
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