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Flow Free

Flow free, my heart,
Deliver the message to your servant

Inscribe within me
    the beauty of a rose,
passion of a lover,
  and the candor of a tear 

Move my hand, as you move my life,
Press it onward without rest,
Let the fear fade away
  Replaced by a striving desire
    To speak your silent words

I pray of you tonight to
lift the burden of
disability and pour forth
as you have never done before; 
That I may listen and pass on
Your triumphs and tragedies
To the world

So flow free, my heart,

The pen is waiting

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  • leslielovesthomas
    November 4, 2007
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    Love it! Great write!

    Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest!

    Leslie


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    November 3, 2007
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    Great poem good luck in the 1st rounds contest


  • Midnight-Engaged
    October 17, 2007

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    Oh, I loved this piece! Wonderful ending, gorgeous background, the whole nine yards! Oh, and I mention GORGEOUS background?


    • Ransomed-n-Redeemed
      October 17, 2007
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      thanks ^^ I'm still in the process of editing the poem, so check back later to see if it's changed. and the background was one of the AP choices. I like it too.