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So They Say.

I am...
a cruel, heard-hearted brat.
An attention seeking, hateful twat.
A fat, self-centered ugly rat.
Or so they say.

I'm the heartless self obsessive,
The cutting, freak, manic depressive,
An angry lass, oh so aggressive,
Or so they say.

Why does it matter what you think of me?
What will it take for your blind eyes to see?
Size isn't an issue! Beauty doesn't matter!
You might as well just serve up
My soul upon a platter!

Worth is not about perfect good looks,
Or what they say of you in books.
Worth is measured by your friends,
Your ability to make amends,
Your love of others and theirs of you,
Your speech, trustworthy? True?
Worth depends on all your heart,
Not if you look pretty or smart.

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Any criticism taken. Not a great piece but gets you the message. Written against bullying.

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  • UnityHope gold member
    October 17, 2007

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    that was simply amazing!
    I loved it!
    very well done poet
    keep up the fantastic writes!
    ♥ Dani