tout le long de ton echine
plonge le plaisir
qui s'echine a te briser le dos
tel de visses faites de feu et de volupte
et qui s'enfoncent droit vers ton desir
et l'enflament
loin des vices qui sevissent
dans un monde de sanctions
des sanctions juste crees pour contrer
le vent houleux de tes emotions...
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i wouldnt be sure i got it totally right .. but from wut i did, i loved it nd the rhymes too !! ..
the whole sound of it is marvelous !!
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speachless!
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vice and virtue never come together unless u put them.. a genius work.... and a hissing feeling while reading... nice use of the s sound.... it worked its magic... (poisonous) lol
PEACE
*****JOWELL*****
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ooh i love this!
i duno if its meant to be that way but the "s" sounds give it this unique heik.. i duno.. like a hissing or a whistling sound.. it gives it a weird beat, and i like it lol
amazing as always!
~rana~
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