Mmmm your ripe and ready
pleasure consumes your face
kneeling down. fingers hidden by thick carpet
you start licking up my shins
further past the knee
I take your long glossy haired head
inside my palm and push your lips to my feet
"kiss them" I say
sticking my toe deep between those soft pink colored lips
tongue slowly sliding between my toes
around the toe nail and then you suck it completely in
I reached down and take your long chained leash in my palms
pull you up by your neck til a small pet like faced expression
meets my own
I start pulling you around
tugging you this way and that making you do circles about me
watching your slender body move and bend
all those curves slowly breathing in the heat of lighted candles
long black hair moves majestically behind you
barely finding itself sweeping accross the red carpet
I move you to the bed
eyes so green and full of lust
I lift the chain up, giving you premission to lay upon my bed
let you roll over into the silky bountiness
losing your small frail self within the lush pillows and full blankets
I kiss your lips and slowly walk backwards, away from you
smiling teasingly as I drop your leash and see your bewildered stare
Hmmm tasty
I leave you there waiting, dissappearing into the huge walk in closet
returning shortly afterwards with a small, bound ankle and wrist female
she's stumbles in her bounds slowly pushing herself accross the floor and to your feet
you smile at me
lit up eyes so shocking and bright
your hair devours her as you lean down and meet her with a kiss
leaving trails of slobber on her duct taped mouth
tears singing in her eyes
my beautiful pet strains to lift her up on the bed
slowly undressing her with her teeth
first comes the small black bra
barely hiding the most perkiest of breast a woman can bear
then comes the tickling
as she slides her tongue down over her silk body and grabs the g- string in her teeth
I gently stroll over to them and take the bound womans feet in my hands and lift her up
thong now sliding down smooth muscular legs
my pet brings them over her toes and throws them aside
starts sucking on her toes and leans down to kiss me as I begin to lick between her thighs
her juices unwillingly drowning me in her akward pleasure
heat rising to my face and the sweetest of smells entering my nose
my lips slowly caressing her milking hole, sliding in circles til tongue finds itself deep inside
moving up and down and sucking each bit of her in
my hands glide up and mount themselves upon her nipples
pinching and pulling
grabbing more of her with my mouth
suculent
my pet crawls up leans down and starts rubbing herself upon the victums face
her sweet smelling cum smearing itself, painting the blue eyed girl like she was a canvas
moaning and sighing my pet begins to rub herself harder
her breaths growing short
hair swining in all directions
the woman in which me so wrongfully used shakes and shivers within my grasps
fighting it, doing her best to hold back
but before she can do anything a wave comes roaring from her body
she screams her muffled cries
as her body empties her errotic lust into my mouth
I lean up, lick my lips, pull back the head of my pet and kiss her
sharing the taste with her
knowing that she enjoys every bit of it...
I get up...
walk away
turn off the lights and come next to the bed to sit down
now it's my pets turn to do as she wishes
this she knows too
for I hear her rip the tape from that womans mouth
quickly drowning out her scream
loud and pircing now went to a soft mubble and disturbing plea for help
I hear my pet giggling
imagine her smilling
thinking of how she must enjoy the things that she does
I can't see only hear
but inside I know every move she'll make
every small cut and small pircing she'll inflict
I can see her inside my head
kissing this woman
frenching her so that she smothers out her cries
as a long silver blade
slides wickedly over her skin
she firsts makes it zigzag accross her throat
then pulls it down and circles the small mass of her nipple
down and up over her rib cages and down into her lips
then it gets painful
this is why I refuse to watch
done it once
a few times and now can nolonger stand the sight
She digs the blade in
under the womans hood
slices through her clit and pulls it up through her skin
slowly digging inside her with her other hand
nails going into flesh pulling and tearing out anything they touch
this is just the way my pet plays
dangerously foul
sickening to an extent that even I'm ashamed to know of
her thoughts leave her no regrets
this is the only way she truelly gets off
she enjoys this sort of thing
ripping and shreading skin
swallowing her victums screams
digging in with long curved nails
bleeding and disembowling
It takes minutes before the woman lies stiff and dead
and the princess that I call my lover
slowly eats away at the deceased's skin...
Author notes
I used a bit of two and mostly option one. Hope U enjoy and this fits the contest...
A contest entry
- Impress me (Adults ONLY) by thefuzzy1.
566 points, ended November 26, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow, very sexy at the beginning while turning very sadistic at the end. Very well done for this type of genre.
Mike
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tis natural and mayhaps to answer ur other question I may get idea's from the music I listen to too! lol. I've been hunting someone in the house to go get me some sour candies...ooo cravin!!!
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quote- "awkward pleasure" very well said... i love a good sadist... people don't understand how much pleasure can be derived from a awkward situation...
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lol cousin's think alike then eh?
thx for the comment. and that couldn't be said much truer 
! how U likin AP so far eh?
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most definitely you my dear
your descriptive ways send me in a whirl with such detail you take the reader to beyond the end and more in a delectable design as always your words amaze and astound me in such a twisted and talented way,,,wonderfully done my dear,,,blessings of love,life,laughter and more....Fire Storm
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Hmmm
I actually feel as though with this piece I've trailed away from my usual state of mind. I found the more cartoons I watch the better at gorey writtings I am. The more I watch the news and really sick movies the less inspired I am to come up with such weird sickness lol. I'm still glad that you enjoyed this. I'm doing my best to write more, but honestly it's really not that easy anymore. lol. no muse here at all.
Much luv and respect!!!
~BI!!!
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Funny you should say that... "I found the more cartoons I watch the better at gorey writtings I am." I always thought they had sumliminal messages! Anyways, very creative write, kudos, cause I sure couldn't have pulled it off!
~*DJ*~
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This is very good
I like the Imagery you give How you reveil just enough to leave the reader Wondering, and the sweet shock you get at the end
Keep up the awsome work
Good luck in the contest
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I'm happy that you enjoyed this.
Or either found it to your liking. This is my first unprewritten write that I've written in a long while. I'm glad that I still somehow have the effect of suspense and shock on people lol!
~BI!
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Aw! I've missed your stuff so much! So glad to have something of yours to read again. I've been jonesing terribly Good luck in the contest!
Sith
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Thanks dear Sithhappens :)
How have you been? Good I hope. I saw this comment the other day but was having internet connection difficulties. Which is rather common on this old pc.
Miss ya girly...^~! Glad that you enjoyed!
much luv and respect!
~BI!
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OH
MY
GOD!
this was.. i duno.. friggin amazingly twisted!
so painful in the end! but somehow for some twisted reason lol u gota love it!
wow
now that was a perfect thing to read to get me out of my sleepy state lol!
i absolutely adore ur twisted sick sick mind!
bestest of luck in the contest!
this totally kicks ass!
~rana~
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Awww!
*meow* to my dearest Rana..."I'm your kitten" hee hee ^^! glad it woke you up...if that's a good thing ^~! lol luvz ya!
~BI!
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