Leave the key
Under the door
Toss the pillows
onto the floor
take the pedals
dark rose red
drop them gently
upon the bed
let the lights
sparkle with delight
for you know
the time is right
take my hand
white like silk
warm my heart
cause my beat
is so still
the wind may blow
the stars may fall
but you an I
we seem to have it all....
Author notes
This one of my favorites, also it's one of my crush's favorites....
Don't you just love it?
Comments
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Amazing words. Pulled me in and grabbed my emotions. Great job!


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wow
aah. I love this one a lot. There's no bad part to it, but my fave lines are, "dark rose red"...damn good imagery!
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if i could give it more stars, i would


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this is good i liked it
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wow i really like this one

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