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The Beginning

Under skies of contrast
The bright stars against the black night
There's a melody in the air
Everything falls in place just right

Tonight I'm over with this world
And I'm reborn in your arms
Everything else doesn't matter
Drifting in admiral of your charms

And as we speak in agreement
Against the distances that separate
We touch unite and combine
The feelings we can not penetrate

If I ever made you feel unworthy
We'll leave that behind our backs
Meanings lost mingled in our breaths
As we give this place the spark it lacks

And I stand up to walk off
A sorrow secretly creeps into your heart
But with a smile in my eyes
Quite clear now this is just the start.

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  • Walking Tall
    October 22, 2007

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    this is beautiful!!!
    such soft imagery full of love
    and promise
    amazing
    i love it
    you have a very lucky special person
    seej