Love runs through me awakening my soul
Like oxygen I breathe you 'til we seem one
For all is harmonious within our warming love
Serene bliss within your arms...
Doubt...doubt...
Fear distorts, warps, twists
Builds walls of cold upon platinum frosted foundation
Rejection must be denied for acceptance is like a vice to the heart
Even rejection without intent is still what it is...
Yet ice melts..even if but briefly
Enough to expose what once flowed with delicate force...
Force which makes itself known as empathy, concern, desire to comfort
Time exposes each precious ounce of priceless Love
Melt water drips like falling diamonds making way for the indescribable
Strength so great earthly comparisons took thousands of years to create
Who knows.. tis possible... with God.. that such a love also took so long.
A contest entry
- heartbreak by live in love.
500 points, ended November 8, 2007, 56 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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waw
so beautiful... i'm speechless... my favorite part was:
Time exposes each precious ounce of priceless Love... it's so deep in your feelings... keep writting... I loved it...
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great poem,very good.
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Thanks
glad you like it. Will check out your work too..
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"Doubt...doubt...
Fear distorts, warps, twists
Builds walls of cold upon platinum frosted foundation
Rejection must be denied for acceptance is like a vice to the heart
Even rejection without intent is still what it is..."
So sorry babe that you felt like that... love you
Beautiful poem expressing your feelings in such a way that you do, always very intimate, very open and sincere...
"Time exposes each precious ounce of priceless Love"
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