my secret garden where all around is color and beauty,
where the garden sings the beautiful song of the roses,
with the memories of the twisting and turning vines,
covered with the colors of sound,
wondering where you are, but i'm the one who's gone,
hiding behind the sweet sent of the musical flowers,
each flower giving off it's own sent, singing it's own song,
the seeds growing with the love that they are given,
memories so beautiful and filled with wonderful sounds,
wondering where you are, but i'm the one who's gone,
beautful seeds growing into musical things that make beautful sounds,
making my life so beautiful with color and musical sounds.
Author notes
this is my garden full of fantasy!
A contest entry
- Secrets of the Garden - This one is for everyone! by Amunet Wolfbane.
525 points, ended November 11, 2007, 17 entries
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Very well crafted with imagery, I feel that the lines drag on a little and drift the reader off a bit but apart from that, this was simply beautiful.
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Whimsical and beautifully crafted. There is something so serene about a garden and all the wonderful scents and colors. You did a great job on this piece. Much enjoyed :D Thank you for entering.
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