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[ waking to temptation ]


waking to temptation
mind in a dream
Devil's persuasion calling "per-diem"


morning dim through
cool, cloudy sky
fall is setting on
my soul


water washes hands as
hot steam rises to high heaven
cleansing but
still guilty past the shower curtain
eclipse


falling to knees under
cold water rinsing
"forgiveness please"


I rise.


















































































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  • colorxmyxworld
    October 18, 2007
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    WOW!!!!

    This is an awesome piece
    I like it a lot
    its powerful
    keep it up


    • Papyrus
      October 18, 2007
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      thank you much for the encouragement!

      -Pap.