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Defenseless


into her mirror she lets her emotions roll
taking into concideration what had just past
breating deeply as each memory touches her soul
subconciously asking "how long will this last?"

a shot to his heart was all it took
to take him down
and leave a mother defenseless to look
at the doctor's lips, a frown

"i love you" she wishes to say
to her only sone before they take him away

Done for my Creative Writing Class on October 3rd 2007

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