Halloween!
What a scene!
Piter patter down the street,
You hear little children's feet.
Halloween is near,
spooky houses is what they fear.
Trick or Treat
Give me something good to eat!
Witches and broom,
watch them go zoom zoom.
Author notes
giggles I need to work on this one.
Amber
Please tell me what you think
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Cute write though
It has a good rhyme and story to it -
cute~
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Thanks
feel free to read more.
Amber
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Playful
This is a simple and silly poem. I like the part about spooky houses, and pittery pattery feet. -
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Thanks for reading I'm glad you liked it feel free to read more
Amber
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This is cute
Written in a way the vision is clear well done
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Thanks for reading.
Amber
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The only line I'd suggest changing is line 6 and I'd change it to "spook houses are their fear" just so it fits in slightly better. Apart from that it is a very good poem, shows the "fun" side to halloween. x
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Hey thanks for reading.
Amber
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I like it! This must be the good side of Halloween! Trick or treat! LOL! Keep up the great work.
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Yep. and thanks for reading.
Amber
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Awww... How cute! Love all the Halloween stuff. Nice write...brings back fond memories!
Blessings~
Az
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Thanks for reading I'm glad you liked it.
Amber
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wow i love halloween and thats a good poem *smiles and gives a cookie*keep writing
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Hehe thanks! oo a cookie! giggles I'm so happy you liked this poem and I got a contest running feel free to check it out!
Amber
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hehe it is cute though thank you for sharing this with me.Best wishes and much love
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Thanks. I have a contest going fell free to check it out!
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