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Rover Shocking News

Rover a once cute dog
In the whole wide world
Never could I imagine
His eye could unfurled

I took him to the vet
What a shocking news
Only a surgery to remove his eye
This is very hard to choose

How can I understand
I really don't know what to say
His pictures with his beautiful eye
Everyone think I should chase him away

No no no I can't believe it
What would you do to see his red eye pop out
If you love your dog would you keep it that way
Would you remove his eye so people won't shout

Author notes

I love my dog what should I do. Everyone thinks his eye would look horibble even if it is there or not. Please tell me what would you do if it was your dog.

Please tell me what you think

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  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    October 17, 2007

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    Nice poem Maria but I'm afraid it doesn't fit my contest. I want nice things; not sad. Sorry but it won't do.
    Brian