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*::. Awaken .::* (Haiku to Weekend Mornings)

Burgundy sunrise
An end to my blissful dreams
A soft transition

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Written October 9th, 2003

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  • Confused Gemini
    November 3, 2003
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    i like this one alot it reminds me of all the sat. mornings waking up to write on cars or to go bowling with Gabe lol always an adventure keep up writing

    Muahz luv 2 you
    Gem


  • Bluestar
    October 10, 2003
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    'burgundy sunrise' <---- ooooh that SO beautiful!! What a gorgeous write!!! Weekend mornings are the best though, waking up to a day without school - can't get much better than that

    My haiku for you, Scarlett:

    Came to read poem
    I loved it so very much
    Here, I comment.

    Don't even know if the syllables are correct, so that's why, ladies and gentlemen, Blue does not do haikus.

    Much love to you
    ~*blue*~
    xxx xxx