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Cease

Paragon. Stipulations of
Failure. A lack of
Success. Victory in an
Event. Time held in
Honor. A secret way of
Prestige. Holding high of
Head. The foremost and front of a
Group. To get together for some
Purpose. That thing no one can
Find. To discover something that was
Lost. Everyone on this
Earth. The surface of this
World. A planet in the
Universe. Unable to hold all my
Questions. Race through minds all
Day. A figment of your
Imagination. A sorrowful tune that think up ways to
Kill. A violent act in which life does
Cease. To end abruptly.

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  • Misery into Melody
    December 1, 2007
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    * kills self out of jealousy*
    damn
    damn boy
    damn

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 17, 2007

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    Oh my gosh. This is an amazing piece well worthy of gold and much more.Thanks for sharing.Best wishes and much love

  • MarriedToTheDevil
    October 17, 2007

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    wowee!!!

    i cant think of anything meaningful etc to say...

    but it really is amazing!!


  • colorxmyxworld
    October 17, 2007
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    this is really good
    *high five*


  • doyouloveit
    October 17, 2007

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    I Hope You Win

    this says so much about different minds i believe anyways, i know you captured some of my personal thoughts here in this poem, which is an incredible write by the way, so much emotion, deeply touching one, kinda reminds me that i shouldn't worry about everything cuz one day it won't matter, thank you for writing this one i wish the best of luck in the contest


  • XxXAmazed MeXxX
    October 17, 2007
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    really good write!
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