Paragon. Stipulations of
Failure. A lack of
Success. Victory in an
Event. Time held in
Honor. A secret way of
Prestige. Holding high of
Head. The foremost and front of a
Group. To get together for some
Purpose. That thing no one can
Find. To discover something that was
Lost. Everyone on this
Earth. The surface of this
World. A planet in the
Universe. Unable to hold all my
Questions. Race through minds all
Day. A figment of your
Imagination. A sorrowful tune that think up ways to
Kill. A violent act in which life does
Cease. To end abruptly.
A contest entry
- what ever by XxXAmazed MeXxX.
400 points, ended October 17, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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* kills self out of jealousy*
damn
damn boy
damn

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Oh my gosh. This is an amazing piece well worthy of gold and much more.Thanks for sharing.Best wishes and much love
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wowee!!!
i cant think of anything meaningful etc to say...
but it really is amazing!!


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this is really good
*high five*
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I Hope You Win
this says so much about different minds i believe anyways, i know you captured some of my personal thoughts here in this poem, which is an incredible write by the way, so much emotion, deeply touching one, kinda reminds me that i shouldn't worry about everything cuz one day it won't matter, thank you for writing this one i wish the best of luck in the contest

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really good write!
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