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a Miracle

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You say you need a miracle~

 

 

Then step into a sunrise

Watch the birth of a brand new day

Feel the essence of the dew

Let it kiss your troubles away

 

 

You say you need a miracle~

 

 

Then step into the moon light

Let her love carry you away

Feel the glow of tenderness

Tomorrow will be a new day

 

You say you need a miracle~

 

 

Miracles are born each day

The air we breathe

The smiles we share

From the gentle wind

Playing in your hair

 

 

LIFE~ is a miracle~

 

 

 

 

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  • Climbing2nothing
    November 6
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    indeed it is...

    w good coffee
    -Jas


  • Ange de nuite
    November 6
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    People forget how easy it is to just feel nature and smile at it. Well done really liked it, good choice of picture as well

  • Bhabani
    November 6
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    very nice poetry

    we just donot belive in miracles...
    we live by them ........


  • Luanne Spinks
    November 5
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    Awesome!

    I really enjoyed the read! Very well written and a beautiful concept! God Bless

  • Hawkeyes
    November 5

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    Excellent

    Very well written it!
    This poem made me feel that I was there. Good imagery!
    Keep on writing and I would like to read some more of your works and don't change a word in this poem. Keep on writing!


  • sexy emo fairy
    November 5
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    I loved this. It cheered me up a little and made me think. Wonderfully done


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    November 5
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    Life is a miracle and we often just take it for granted until it is threatened by health issues or we lose someone close and are reminded just how frail this life can be. Rushing through this life full speed with no purpose or appreciation dimminishes the quality that life can afford. Love how you expressed the beauty in the simple things, how truely blessed we are! Niaish for sharing this thoughtful reminder. Write on dear Sister.

    Dennis

  • ditto864
    November 5
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    You say you need a miracle-Miracles happen every day.
    In our hearts , in our spirit, in everything that we say.


  • sonia 77
    November 5
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    Very ,very cute !!!


  • spiritual wolf
    November 5
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    i love the ending in this piece. it wa fantastic as was the rest of the write.


  • Loveprevails
    November 5

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    Wonderful Write! Your wording was brilliant. There is so much hope in this piece...Feel the essence of the dew let it kiss your troubles away... I loved the imagery this poem poured out, and I think adding the image set the tone for see everyday as I a brand new begining at endless possibilites. Thank you for sharing I look forward to reading more from you :


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      November 5
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      loveprevails

      how very sweet and i thank you so much..it was my hope when i wrote this poem to give hope that life is precious and filled with so many wonderful gifts thank you again


  • MusicBubble silver member
    July 17
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    Beautiful!!!!

    This is an awesome write. And completely true


  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    November 3, 2008

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    Hood-Wink!

    Life is the greatest miracle of all, I'm waiting for a wonderful miracle to happen today - my cousin's baby girl will come into the world and begin a brand new day

    I find this poem to be soothing and uplifting, such gentle lines of the perfect words, to remind us how blessed we are...

    You have been Hood-Winked by a Bandit
    Take care...~Lilac


  • Melodies
    November 3, 2008

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    HOODWINKED OH YES!

    A beautiful, inspiring poem that sets a wonderfully positive tone for my new day! We all need some miracles and they are all around us.


  • Shadow Lynx
    August 18, 2008

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    The preciousness of life, a miracle itself and you point out that the simple things we see point the way to creating that miracle. A dear sweet message of hope for all, soothing and pleasant, thank you for sharing

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      August 19, 2008
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      Gd66uk

      and thank you kindly for the sweet comment...im so pleased you could see the hope lieing within my words...life is a miracle just within its self


  • Capt Jed silver member
    August 15, 2008

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    I LOVE A SUNRISE

    I am just in AWE of the picture itself. But... the poem that describes it is also awesome. I love the line "Feel the essence of the dew Let it kiss your troubles away. It makes me realize once again that every new day is another miracle, as is life itself.
    Thanks, I'll be back to read more of your work. It's very beautiful.
    Ron


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      August 15, 2008
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      Capt Jed

      niaish my new friend for the kind words and my heart is moved that you enjoyed so much


  • Asylaarix
    April 29, 2008

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    I love the idea of this poem ... it's so simply beautiful and articulate ... it shows great imagery and support for the ones in need ... I am so happy that you have decided to enter this contest ... it's wonderful to see that people out there do care about those in recovery. Thank you again and good luck in the contest.

    Chantelle


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      May 13, 2008
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      Immortally Yours

      Niaish my friend for such a beautiful comment...it has touched my heart as the contest did...


  • onesugar gold member
    April 24, 2008

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    This is simply beautiful and oh so true.

    Good luck with the contest

    ~sugar~


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    April 24, 2008

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    That was very very beautiful my Sister. It was very deep and the piece carried me away to another place. I am sure that that this wonderful piece will be well-received. Thank you so much.

    Love
    You Brother
    Wayne Leon
    xx


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      April 24, 2008
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      Wayne Leon Learmond

      niaish my brother for the kind words and my heart sighs that you have enjoyed otc


  • Emile
    April 3, 2008

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    Very Good

    Your own words "life is a miracle" eloquently sums up the feelings that your poem releases to the page. An elegant depiction of the nature's innocence and purity. You have a quick wit and an enviable imagination. An outpouring of emotions that surges up from the heart and splashes against the page in quiet defiance.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      April 4, 2008
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      Emile

      awe! my friend, your tender words pull a smile from my heart niaish so much!


  • Lady Altheia
    February 1, 2008

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    hoodwink

    So very true sister wolf, Life is precious and we should cherish it. Keep writing wonderful poetry.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      February 4, 2008
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      Lady Altheia

      Life is a treasure a precious gem and not to be wasted thank you love so much


  • tawk gold member
    January 31, 2008

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    Hood-Wink!

    Yes my sister Life is a miracle!! We should rejoice in it everyday. What a beautiful write. It brought a sense of peace over me. Thanks for penning.

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      February 4, 2008
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      tawk

      awe! my sister, just comments and my precious little Jasmine just makes my day! thank you so much for just be you and loving me


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    January 1, 2008

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    How true
    the mysteries of life stare us in the face
    and yet we search elsewhere to find them

    Well done, nihimhinozi


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      January 2, 2008
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      Temple of Aphrodite

      Niaish Life is indeed a wonderous miracle but so sad to say so many loose sight of it


  • Lowell Poe
    November 15, 2007

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    What can I say.
    This piece speaks for itself.
    Miracles are not always the sky's breaking open,
    with thunder and dramatics,
    but love for yourself and others.
    Love is the greatest miracle.
    I often think,
    that trying to get others,
    to realize this,
    would be the hardest miracle.
    So fine my sister,
    So fine.

    Much love,
    TEN BEARS

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      November 15, 2007
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      Lowell Poe

      Im so touched by your words...Thank you kindly my Brother for always leaving a little piece of you behind for me


  • GoodKnightPoet
    November 14, 2007

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    Life is a miracle. I really like your words: they are so descriptive. I can really feel a miracle the way you describe it. Than you for your write.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      November 14, 2007
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      goodknightpoet

      Niaish my friend for your kind words I am so pleased you liked my words.To me life is a wonderful miracle

  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    November 14, 2007

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    Tender Wolf,

    You speak truth with your gentle reminder that LIFE IS A MIRACLE! Such a precious gift LIFE is we need to cherish it every day, open our eyes to the countless blessings that surround us and whispers...'You are Loved'.

    Good poem, well written and appreciated my friend and Sister.

    Gray Elk, your humble brother.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      November 14, 2007
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      Haiku-bless-you

      My Brother Gray Elk...I am touched by your words of tenderness and truth Niaish for careing

  • Tercarro
    November 14, 2007

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    Rich thoughts

    This is so compelling and wonderful advice to all. Life is simply that, taste the air and a miracle will happen for us all.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      November 14, 2007
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      Terrcarro

      AWE! im so blessed to have your words upon my page...thank you kind sir

  • Hypocritical Oath
    November 5, 2007

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    Love it

    So true, I think too many of us (and I'm no exception) take the many things around us for granted. Just the fact that we walk to Earth itself is nothing short of greatness, and in this piece you show that without question. Well done on communicating we all need to hear so well, and with such ease!


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      November 5, 2007
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      Hypocritical Oath

      Niaish my new Friend and Im so pleased you enjoyed my words and they could touch even for a little bit

  • Eulb kcalB
    October 31, 2007

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    Miracles are born each day

    The air we breathe

    The smiles we share

    From the gentle wind

    Playing in your hair





    LIFE~ is a miracle~


    what a gentle piece! I love it Ann. We all need these friendly reminders to not take life for granted and just enjoy each moment given. To appreciate the gift. Thank you much for sharing with me.


    luv
    Jamila


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      November 1, 2007
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      A woman to love

      I am so pleased you enjoyed, your words do warm my heartThank you my friend so much!


  • Desire gold member
    October 30, 2007

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    So True!!

    Life is certainly a miracle!!
    Beautiful piece You have penned Sweet Soul
    Love the words spoken with energetic force
    to give empowerment!!
    Wonderful!!

    Thank You for sharing Your Spirit!
    Keep that quill dancing~~
    Many blessings to You in all You do
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 31, 2007
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      Desire

      Niaish my sister for the kind words and encouragement I always look so forward to your commentsI am very pleased you enjoyed!


  • Sandygram
    October 27, 2007

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    You have penned a beautiful poem. The imagery is stunning. Yes life itself is a miracle and a gift from God. Thsnk you for sharing this with us. It was a pleasure to read this blessed morning. Take care, Sandy .

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 29, 2007
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      Sandygram

      Thank you sweet soul so much for the kind words...im just thrilled you enjoyed it and maybe brought you a little smile


  • rite
    October 26, 2007

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    Life truly is, as can be sensed in each word of this poem. None of us is present without reason. Seeing the miracles inside and around us taking place, is part of our quest to find the reason for life. And once we have found it, a thrill destined to exist even beyond the span of this life will be the result. This poem you wrote is a great eye and heart opener to those who are searching. Thank you for creating and sharing. I enjoyed being on this page very much. Take care,

    Chris

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 26, 2007
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      Unda

      I am touched by your comment!...For life is a miracle and wonderful light that touches us all.When it is found it moves in and brings such comfort that even death can not bring fear!So many are searching! So many are lost! If only we could share this beautiful light!...Thank you friend, from my open heart to yours

      ANN~


  • Dragons Lady
    October 25, 2007

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    This is absolutely beautiful. Yes life is a miracle, every breath taken is a miracle. So lovely and inspiring with a sense of peace. A deep breath taken to assure that we are alive and that this miracle is real and then a sigh of relief that we still exist. I love the last stanza. Thank you for sharing your words. Always a pleasure reading your writing.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 26, 2007

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      DarkShadowAngle

      AWE! my sweet friend, I have missed you! Im so very pleased you enjoyed my words...Niaish for careing


  • Justusdreams
    October 25, 2007

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    Hi beautiful friend, I really loved this, especially the about the gentle wind playing with your hair. That is a beautiful visual. Timber has continued to hold on which somehow has been very healing. I guess he knows best. I just thrive on everyday he chooses to go on and bless the time I have. Hope all is well on your end. LOL Angelina

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 26, 2007
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      Justusdreams

      My sweet friend, please know my heart rest with you and Timber...he knows now that you understand he is dieing and will go when he knows you have had a little time to heal...I am here for you my dear firnd

  • taviel
    October 25, 2007
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    i liked i


  • poeticweaver gold member
    October 25, 2007

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    True,

    Just the fact that we awake each day shows how life is a miracle. You are so write, and I enjoyed this inspirational piece from your heart that is well needed this day. Peace my pet, Timothy


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 25, 2007
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      poeticweaver

      PURRRRR! I am so pleased I could bring a little sunshine to your beautiful heart this day Niaish my pet

  • Bob Fox
    October 25, 2007

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    In Life

    We at times forsake our souls & become captives of our desires. We look for the glory & splendor. And later become the crier. But at times we are touched. Even though we get weak. but in the end, no matter what, Tis peace & love which, gently, we do seek. And for you my gentle hearted friend I wish to pave a path to that fine time


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 25, 2007
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      BobFox

      AWE! Bob your tender words touch my heart and bring a smile to my lips...Thank you very much!

  • Bob Fox
    October 25, 2007
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    In Life

    We at times forsake our souls & become captives of our desires. We look for the glory & splendor. And later become the crier. But at times we are touched. Even though we get weak. but in the end, no matter what, Tis peace & love which, gently, we do seek. And for you my gentle hearted friend I wish to pave a path to that fine time


  • kennethlaney
    October 24, 2007

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    Excellent!

    That was very interesting and informative My Indian Princess. A lot of people do not realize that until it is too late. Hope you are well Ann.
    "BOO"


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 24, 2007
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      kennethlaney

      awe BOO! you are always so very sweet. Thank you love for the kind words and very pleased you enjoyed


  • klassy lassy
    October 23, 2007

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    Life is precious and you are, too. I love the gratitude in these lines that urge us to be aware of possibilities and blessings in being. Thank you ~ Karen


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 24, 2007
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      klassy lassy

      AWE! my most dearest friend thank you so much for your kind words. They mean so much to truly they do


  • Moodayo-Okohke silver member
    October 23, 2007

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    Wonderful

    Wonderful sweet Lady!...You have penned a most real piece!...Sending clear thoughts and feelings to your readers...Life is truly a miracle and so very precious! Thank you kindly for sharing and look forward to reading more.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 23, 2007
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      Moodayo-Okohke

      I am pleased you enjoyed and thank you kindly for the comment


  • Restless heart
    October 22, 2007

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    so much of our time is spent on the worries of the day that we forget about the miracle that life truely is Thank you for helping me to remember

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 23, 2007
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      Restless heart

      My spiritual sister and best friend Thank you so much and Im so pleased to have reminded you just how precious life is


  • SunDew
    October 20, 2007

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    Amen!

    I agree wholeheartedly, my dear sis! It's beautiful, simple, & elegant all at the same time. Thank you for sharing!


    ~SunfloweRose


  • Swan song gold member
    October 20, 2007

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    This was awesome and so very true. I love the way you wrote this it had a profound effect in my heart.
    Well done dear!

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 23, 2007
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      Swan song

      AWE! Im so pleased it touched you!...That is what I long for with every poem I write, Just touch my readersNiaish my friend


  • W a s p
    October 20, 2007
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    And...

    so it is, and so may it continue, especially for you Ann. Lots of love...ian.


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 23, 2007
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      W a s p

      My sweet wasp how your tender words do touch my heart...Niaish my friend


  • Nevel
    October 19, 2007

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    your poem even sings a little.my favorite is the second stanza.your poem gives also hope.Yes,my live is already a miracle.good writing!Thank you!


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 23, 2007
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      nevel69

      Im so very pleased you enjoyed my friend...Life is a miracle isnt it?...

  • midnightblue1272
    October 18, 2007
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    A miracle is born

    After reading this, a miracle is born and her name is Tender Wolf! Superb!


  • Sunshine Always
    October 18, 2007

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    Ah my special friend "the miracles of life". Ann you have said all there is to say here in this beautiful write. What more to mend a broken or tired heart than any one of these precious gifts. Thank you for reminding me how very lucky I am... God bless and a speedy recovery to you..love across the miles...mal

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 18, 2007
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      Fool no 1

      My sweet mal,
      your words bring soft tears to my eyes and a warth to my heartI am so pleased to be able to touch you as well with me words...nemehotatse my dearest


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    October 18, 2007

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    you are a miracle dear wolf,,thought i had left this observation before xx

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 18, 2007
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      PoorPeterGreenslade

      My sweet soul...I do love it when you grace my page
      you have been here beforeBut as often as you like...for I do love it


  • captain howdy
    October 17, 2007

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    BEAUTIFUL!!!! You have seen the beautiful miracles of the every day! I love this! I have to bookmark it!


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 18, 2007
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      Elisabeth Strange

      Niaish my sweets, you do make me smile and warm my heart so very soft Pleased it touched you!


  • aliceramone
    October 17, 2007

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    so true but people are too pessimistic and live in tunnel vision without truly opening their eyes...a great thought provoking piece with serene imagery that beckons truth-EXCELLENT!


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 18, 2007
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      aliceramone

      Im so touched by your comment and the wonderful taste of wisdom you have left behind...Niaish my friend


  • Rose Angel gold member
    October 17, 2007

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    Lovely as you would write it, getting to know you...Life is a miracle. Others may think we need to do such and such and we will get one.Don't get me wrong..I believe in miracles..It is what we learn along the way thru waiting that is the bigger miracle I think...A precious write, from a precious sister!

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 18, 2007
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      Rose Angel

      O' my sweet Sister, your tender words touch my heart so deep...You are the bravest soul I know. Your pain is so very bad, yet you reach out to comfort us all...You my dear Angel are a miracle to me


  • arafura gold member
    October 17, 2007

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    step into a sunrise...

    Lovely poem Ann! Yes miracles occur every day... life itself is the greatest one of all! There's such a sweet and peaceful quality to this! Bravo my Wadu Spirit!


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 17, 2007
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      arafura

      My Shadow Keeper how you do make me blush Im so thrilled you enjoyed my words Thank you kindly


  • kooleyes
    October 17, 2007

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    This is so beautiful. I love the way it sounds when read aloud. Just beautiful. Thanks for the read and keep on writing


    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 17, 2007
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      kooleyes

      Thank you kindly for your sweet words of praise and Im so pleased you enjoyed it...means a lot to me


  • LittleMoon silver member
    October 17, 2007

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    The picture and the words combine to bring inner peace and calmness to troubled thoughts. To slow down and get our priorities right. Beautiful and thank you.

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 17, 2007
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      Frosty25

      Niaish my friend for the kind words and so very pleased it gave you a good feeling That is what I was hopeing for


  • tomisb
    October 17, 2007

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    From the wonder we are to the gifts we are given, such is the miracle of our being. Let us fall into touch with our being and we begin to realize how much greater are the gifts then just this skin we are in. Then, laughter joy become messengers for the love that shares in us all. Wonderfully done, may you touch hearts and bring them to their own discovery of joy.
    love, Tom B.

    • Whispering Wind Moderators member
      October 17, 2007
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      tomisb

      AWE!you have touch my heart with your tenderness...You are the master of giving fine poet!...I am honored by your words

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