I long to feel the touch of your skin
to hear you moan as I begin
to explore your body, to enter in,
to your feminine temple of love.
To kiss your face, to kiss your eyes
your smile would have me mesmerised
sounds from your lips, sweetest sighs,
of your feminine temple of love.
To kiss your mouth, tongues entwine
our juices flow, yours and mine
on the sweetest nectar we will dine,
from your feminine temple of love.
My fingers probe and find your clit
my hand draws circles on your tit
upon your face I long to sit,
kiss your feminine temple of love.
I’ll suck and probe and make you cum
on me you’ll work till I succumb
true lovers you and I become,
in our feminine temples of love.
A contest entry
- Lesbian Erotica, Ya'll wanna enter by A-Sky-Lark.
725 points, ended November 23, 2007, 20 entries
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Comments
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hmmm...not sure what to think about this one.
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I love the imagery!! The flow is excellent and repetition drives it home! This is just plain hot!
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This is a fantastic write
Showing love shared by two women
Flowed really well I also
liked the repetiveness too it
A pleasure to read
~sugar~
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Excellent
This is excellent hot and steamy go girls go or as the saying goes Good Girls. Desire Fire and all that cums with it. Love enjoyed and shared by two hearts just how it should be best wishes. keep up the fantastic writes. -
Stunning
This is a fantastic poem. Wonderful imagery here. The flow and the repeated rhyme is wonderful. I really enjoyed reading this.
Fantastic, Sue.
Wayne
xxx
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What an interesting poem describing the love of one woman for another.
This is written with sensuality and HOT love, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this and look forward to more from you.
All the best
Sue
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Thank-you for your lovely comment. I have looked at some of your lovely poems, I hope we can become friends.
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Very enticing
I'm sorry I'm not the right sex to be the recipient!
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