I had a dream this morning in which buddha taught me of arrogance
He showed me my thoughts from deep inside
He gave me the power to do anything,
So I met a man who cursed me and I sent him to him
Now budda taught the man a few new words
Then he sent him back down to me
A contest entry
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Comments
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Interesting, very simple
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I liked the imagery of this poem and resonance. It makes the reader think some. Only thing, the spelling of Buddha has been put incorrectly. Please check that.
Charishma
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