Maggots and beetles slithering,
piles crunching beneath my feet.
I come, to where you're chained,
ensuring I get a front row seat.
Your heart is mine for the taking,
I will seize it measure for measure.
Rip and tear, twist and squeeze,
slowly so I can enjoy the pleasure.
Do not expect sorrow or sympathy,
my vengeance will fill you with pain.
Scream, I will slice out your tongue,
so you can't pathetically complain.
Dank and mucid, terror struck eyes,
piece by piece of you will I dissect.
Hung drawn and quartered is to good,
for you should have shown some respect.
Dismember, sever, slice and rip,
a silver blade skims along your skin.
Say goodbye to your worthless body,
as the operation is about to begin.
I lick my lips, the blood is divine,
with your skin I mop my warm brow.
One mistake I may have accepted,
But two? I would never allow.
Liver, guts and entrails, served warm,
your heart I will simmer and roast.
A lesson has been taught tonight,
no longer are you able to boast!
A guillotine smile upon your face,
eyes bloodshot, lolling in sockets.
I cut a tiny piece of your heart,
and place it in my solid gold locket.
Author notes
Ok so I wrote you a new one. I love writing dark writes, hope you all enjoy reading it!
Option 28, blood/gore
A contest entry
- Spooky by krymsin kyss.
600 points, ended October 30, 2007, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
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so dark it scary
well done
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I cut a tiny piece of your heart,
and place it in my solid gold locket.
Great ending as well as the rest. The beginning is really in your face and doesn't let up. I would personally remove the word "solid" before gold, but that is just preference.
Becky
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Congrats on trophies."I got a tiny piece of your heart and placed it in my solid gold locket."This is scary and evil and you are all of the things above
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what I was looking for
very nice I loved the ending
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very good pink! this is very gruesome! love it!
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The last stanza was my favorite...but the whole thing was amazing. I really liked this one. Thanks for entering and good luck.
Avec amour *~Krymsin Kyss~* -
Well done!
I lick my lips, the blood is divine,
with your skin I mop my warm brow.
One mistake I may have accepted,
But two? I would never allow.
Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned! I love this, it's absolutely brutal and very vivid. Let me tell you, this is a MUCH better way of getting back at a guy than keying his car. ;D
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ewwwwww ick! lol but very clever
and super spooky..
absolutely scarey!
Best luck in the contest!
~Pastel
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haunting
Very scary and ooohhh!!!
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