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Tears Fall Gently

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.
.
.
I
love
you, so
special to
me. Love you
so, can you not
see? Your life's precious to
me as mine. Your smile puts me
upon cloud nine. My heart, she bleeds
and waits for you. You have no love, though
mine is true. I'm just a friend in your sweet
sight. But I am lost in seas of spite. I help
you deal with your new date. I'm crying more
and more of late. Tears fall gently on the
ground. All this pain without a sound.
Why is my heart filled with pain?
Can I ever love again?


Author notes

Written because I am helping a boy with his girlfriend, when I love him. Sad and lost feeling. My first 'picture poem', constructive criticism and comments much appreciated.

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  • maggy1126
    October 17, 2007

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    wow I love it... it was great.. Tears fall gently on the ground. All this pain without a sound... I love this part .. is the sad truth sometimes.. I been there too..

    • luvpoems32
      October 17, 2007
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      I really love this poem!! It is very creative. I've been there,done that too!!!Keep up the good WOOOOOOORK!!!!!