rain falls
around my shoe -
a tear
In a list
A contest entry
- heartbreak by live in love.
500 points, ended November 8, 2007, 56 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 7 of 7
-
it has been a very long time since i read a haiku and i've never had on in a contest i love that fact that you entered this because it is so diffrent from everything else i've read in this contest. it's definatly one to stand out and that in fact is what a contest is all about so i'd like to congradulate you on being a finalist and thank you entering and wish you the very best of luck in the contest lil
-
Another perfect haiku and this one is so fitting for the theme of heartbreak--it shows without telling--perfect! Good luck in the contest!
-
-
Thank you, dear Maggie
-
-
beautiful
-
-
Good evenin!
Thanks!! Hope all is well with u..
-
-
Wow, a very good Haiku. You have summed up heart ache in a few words. Good luck in the contest!
-
-
Thank you, pinktat
Have a blessed day,
Charishma
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 7 of 7
