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Quest for Camelot

Quiet I need to here
Urges fought to find the sword
Excalibur went missing
Stolen from Arthur's hands
Taken from it's rightful owner

Forced to search the Forbidden Forest
ogres take sword for a toothpick
Reward to save his sword

Camelot must be saved
Agility is a must(Yet sadly lacking)
Meeting of the hearts
Expression through songs of the heart
Leading with his stick and falcon
Out to save Camelot
Two headed dragon to help beat the evil

Author notes

option #1...
im not too sure about it.. I think it's lacking... everything in it... but idk... maybe that's just me... be honest about it please.

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  • Megan Awesome
    October 18, 2007

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    Forced to search the Forbidden Forest
    Lol for some reason that reminded me of Harry Potter. I didn't notice until the end that this was an acrostic. It's very good. I don't think I can even choose a favorite part!
    Megan