As you casually sit there
comfy in your chair
I hope the words I penned
fill an empty space in your
ever- curious mind
may every page that you turn
take you places that only I have been
make you feel emotions only I
have felt
take my words for free
welcome all the stirring your soul can muster
for I lay my life out, in my pen
so go ahead....
open my window
A contest entry
- Best Prewrites From December 2007 by amaranthine lover.
800 points, ended January 11, 2008, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Quite an interesting and intriguing piece. It's very light and breezy just like an open window on a lovely spring day I think that you captured that feeling spectacularly well. thanks for entering.
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Oh wow...
great perspective penned with grace!
I love how well you executed this poem...
The picture is lovely too.
You should enter this into a contest allowing prewrites...this is really stellar writing butterfly!
You impress me...as usual...your sweet heart always infuses your poetry into soft and pleasing journeys of the soul...
Very well done!
Blessings! Tammy
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Wow Silver my friend so many times I have read your
beautiful words and this made me think of that
So many times you give such a heart felt page
that I needed to hear.
So this is a true blessing of your self
Thank you for sharing again
and as I turn this page i relize you write for your self and others.
Thank you my friend
So nice to hear from you again
Delane
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Awwe thank you Delane! You always have inspired me to write on. Thank you again my friend!! That was an uplifting commment.
GBY
SilverButterfly
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for I lay my life out, in my pen so go ahead...open the window...Beautiful words from a poetess!...Longing to sharing the emotions and stir the readers heart within...sighs...Wonderful!...Thank you love for sharing that beautiful heart with me
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Thank you for your sweet comments!
GBY
SilverButterfly
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Incredible! Yes...open my window! You managed to describe how we feel as we spill our hearts unto the pages of the cold world. Great job, my friend. Blessings, Doris
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oh thank you for your awesome comment! you are very kind
GBY
Silver
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well done, a nicely done point of view and telling the reader the thoughts as she drinks in the words and the hopes for what the words will mean, very creative. Thank you for this fine entry into the contest and best of luck to you in the judging...PK
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thank you very much for your comment!
GBY
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