You kept me warm when I was cold
You held me tight and I was sold
I always treasured the warmth you gave
And our love I thought we could actually save
But the words were false your love a lie
And I could do nothing but wait for you Good bye
Your kisses became bitter, your hug became ice
I knew this would be over with a roll of the dice
I waited and sat in the darkness alone
It happened you left now I'm chilled to the bone
Then I sleep I dream I've come back to the sun
When I awake it takes off at a run
My tears have become my own sweet silent lullaby
And it seems come morning they did not die
This happens when I think of you
God please make this stop, What am I to do?
A contest entry
- heartbreak by live in love.
500 points, ended November 8, 2007, 56 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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on line six you should be your i believe. but beyond that this is a very well written poem it holds emotion and your atention very well i'm awed but this poem really and i'm pleased to inform you that your in the top 10 in my contest which i want to thank you for entering and wish you the best of luck
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This is a great write, I love the rhythmic flow you have going. I feel a lot will relate to the way you have expressed your emotion. I know I do, especially the last line. Best of luck in the contest! -
I love this poem it has true heart in it and true emotion, i hope to read more of your work along the way and maybe you can read some of mine too. Keep it up. God Bless
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