I WANT TO.....
I want to feel
your heavenly warm embrace.
I want to look
into your beautiful face.
I want to touch
you in all the right places.
I want to see
you covered in white laces.
I want to smell
your scent of sweet perfume.
I want to hear
your laughter fill the room.
I want to make
love to you all night long.
I want to sing
with you your favorite song.
I want to dance
with you until morning light.
I want to hold
you and make everything all right.
I want to comb
your beautiful soft long hair.
I want to tell
you that I truthfully do care.
I want to listen
to your heart beat next to mine.
I want to know
that you will always be fine.
I want to taste
all the teardrops you let fall.
I want to run
to answer your beckoning call.
I want to cover
you with kisses and well wishes.
I want to help
clean the house and do the dishes.
I want to whisper
how much I really do love you.
I want to say
that no one loves you like I do.
Author notes
Just another silly love poem. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Excellent
Hey there ck.
This poem is so beautifully penned my dear friend.
You have done a wonderful job with this one.
I hope you read this write to your wife.
She would love it.
I know exactly how you feel.
Being in love with someone is a pure joy and a delight.
Well done.
Keep up with the great work.
Keep on penning.
*S* Cynthia
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Thank you Cynthia for reading and commenting this was a joy to write. Glad to see you back writing and commenting. Appreciate it.
Lots of Love,
Ck
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Tender!
I found your hopes here, a simple pleasure to hear and to read, as I feel you in your thoughts, and generous movement of love... So very peaceful, and forthcoming. I find your poetry to be moreover endearing to the last... As I tell you I have grown very fond of it... Excellent write...
~ James ~
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Thank you James for reading and commenting. It is much appreciated. This was a fun one to write.
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Beautifully silly and frilly with thoughts of romance and love. I LOVED this.
Yes, It makes me want to giggle. Enjoyed this so much. ~Pamela 
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Thank you Pamela for reading and commenting. This was a fun write. Thanks again.
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brilliant
this is so very well put together loved it.
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Thank you angel-lover for reading and commenting. I appreciate it very much.
CK
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that is so completely amazing
its so beautiful
and incredible
and i love this..
i keep re reading this since you put it up.. and thought i had commentedd before, but apparently it hasnt shown.
but yea
so in love,
so caring
great job.
love it
beks
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Thank you Beks for reading and your awesome comments. I appreciate it.
Much love to you
CK
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Please tell me
Have any of these lines ever worked?
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Of course they work. They work all the time. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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This is sweet. She is such a lucky woman! I really liked how it's not just the romance that you desire with her, but to go with her through the drudgery of life as well.
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Thanks for reading and commenting it is greatly appreciated.
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Beautiful!
As always you have such a way with words this was beautiful and heartfelt....loved it!
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Thank you Jennifer for reading and commenting I'm glad you enjoyed.
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Charley, This is the sweetest poem that I have ever read. It brought tears to my eyes. It isn't silly at all Charley. It was heart felt and genuine. I love you. You are and amazing writer and poet and I always love reading your writes.
LOVE ALWAYS YOUR SEXY BEST FRIEND,
GUINETH
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Thanks Guin for reading and commenting. I always love hearing from you.
Love always,
Charley
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Aw, this is a beautiful write. I liked the flow of this with the repeating line of "I want to..." And, lots of emotion expressed in this piece, too. Keep writing and thanks for sharing.
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Thank you Haley for reading and commenting. I really appreciate it!!!
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AWWWW.. LOVE CAN BE SOOOOO SWEET WHEN IT IS NOT SOOOO HARD. NOT A SILLY LOVE POEM AT ALL.. I THINK IT IS SWEET AND SHOWS YOUR LOVE FOR HER.... IT TOUCHED MY HEART.
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Thank you Sweet musings for reading and commenting glad you enjoyed.
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I love this poem. It's a lot of what I want to tell someone, and you helped me find the words. I had my soon-to-be-girlfriend read it and we both cried a little. You are very talented.
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Thank you DreamWeaver for reading and commenting. I'm glad it inspired you.
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So sweet...
Another sweet write to melt my heart. Beautiful words penned here. Thanks for sharing CK.
Sunshine
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Thank you Sunshine for reading and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed.
lots of love,
Charley
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