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What I can't have

When I look into your eyes
What I see is picture perfect
I wish that you were mine
If only you could know
Longing for your touch
Wishing for a kiss
Wanting that feeling
The feel of your hair
Within my finger tips
With every thought of you
In each and every passing day
My heart breaks a little more
My tears fall a little bit harder
Never wanting it to be like this
To be wanting what I can't have

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  • MacDaddy13
    October 17, 2007

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    awww

    Its sad in a romantic way. I used to always feel like that but now I don't because I have what I want.


  • live in love
    October 17, 2007
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    i like this poem a lot but the end seams very sudden it just drops off at the end. other than that is is a very relatable poem and very nicely written as well and i wish you the best of luck in the contest lil


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 17, 2007

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    Fab!!

    This is a great write, many will relate to this. Its the age old story, wanting what we cannot have, very well penned. Best of luck in the contest!