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Hold Me (Back)

my screams;
ignored--
another tear
through our picture.

carefully, you
reassure me.
and i believe you.
but why?

    over and over,
    again, again,
    one more time.

rip me apart and
pretend
you

don't notice


        that you're
        killing me.

the final pull,
        s e p a r a t i o n.
you're gone,
away;
though you said you'd stay...


        theres no holding
        you

back,

    like you do to me.

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